单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;运用了丰富的复杂句,另外需注意一些句法错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,she is very shy,before i know her,I thinking i never with the shy girls make friends, I hope she should be optimistic,do not be shy, but she never changes. I think i can change her,i never thought she have change me,that is interesting. We just chat on line, we live in two city, we meet in our hometown at the spring festival, she don not have change.