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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(39):新的班集体

发布时间:2013-07-29 18:23浏览次数:471
要求:
假设你是舟山中学的学生李越,班里从外地转来一名同学李华,他一时无法融入新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
☆帮他分析原因
☆给他提出建议
☆陈述你帮助他的具体打算

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Dear Li Hua,
I'm very glad to become your classmate. I know you are worried about your study and don't know how to adapt yourself to the new environment. ____________________________________________________________________
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Best regards,
Yours,
                                            Li Yue
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Dear Li Hua, I'm extremely delightful to become your classmate. I know you are worried about your study and don't know how to adapt yourself to the new environment. There are some suggestions about it and I hope they can help you. You know we always become puzzled when we go to a new environment because we don't know people around us and even don't know what to do. I think you should make friends with the students in our class. Then if you have any problem you can ask us or our teachers for help. We would try our best to help you. After class, I'll show you around our school and tell you something about it. If you have any problem, please tell me and I will give you my advice not only on the study but also on your life here. All in all, I hope you can adapt yourself to the new environment and we can become good friends. yours, Li Yue.

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