单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;运用了丰富的复杂句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,she is very shy, i know her before,I thinking i never with the shy girls make friends, I hope she should be optimistic,and do not be shy, but she never change. I think i can change her,i never thought she have change me,that is interesting. We just chat on line, we live in two city, we met in our hometown at the spring festival, she don not have change.