单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;文中有几处句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,she is very shy,I thinking i never with the shy girls make friends, I hope she should be optimistic,and do not be shy, but she never change. I think i can change her,i never thought she have change me,that is interesting. We chat on line, we live in the different city, we met in our hometown at the spring festival, she do not have change.