文中词汇使用较丰富,学术词汇使用要加强;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。
As we know, English has already become an international language. It is widely used in the world. However, a few students find it hard to master it. Let me show how. Firstly, make up your mind to learn English well and never give it up. Secondly, it is an effective way to read the text aloud in the morning and try to remember the important words, phrases and patterns. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should finish all the homework on time. When you come across some problems, turn to your teacher or classmates for help. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Thus, all of us should make great progress one day.