简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,maybe you usually heard that parents do something for children.Those parents think it is good for children.On the contrary,it is wrong ideal.It reminds me of many kids even can't clean the clothes when he go to college. The reasons for this are obvious.The most important reason is that most parents only have one kid in China.So they seem him as baby and they very love him.But a man must learn living in the socity.In order to let this children independly,parents must let it go.Thus,this kid can integrate into society.On the one hand,parent must teacher teach them learn basic living skills when they were child.On the other hand,children should not rely on parent,Keep in mind to do it ourselves.Only this, you maybe adapt this socity quickly. A good family education will equip you for life.In China we often say,parent is first teacher in children life.We muse pay high attention to this family problen.