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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5523
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Nowadays,maybe you usually heard that parents do something for children.Those parents think it is good for children.On the contrary,it is wrong ideal.It reminds me of many kids even can't clean the clothes when he go to college. The reasons for this are obvious.The most important reason is that most parents only have one kid in China.So they seem him as baby and they very love him.But a man must learn living in the society.In order to let this children independently,parents must let it go.Thus,this kid can integrate into society.On the one hand,parent must teacher teach them learn basic living skills when they were child.On the other hand,children should not rely on parent,Keep in mind to do it ourselves.Only this, you maybe adapt this society quickly. A good family education will equip you for life.In China we often say,parent is first teacher in children life.We muse pay high attention to this family problen.

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