3.参考词汇:牛津--Oxford费用--fee
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I‘m Li Hua.Now,I stay at Oxford to train language.I plan that travelling in London in sunday.I surf online about travelling.Your tourist administration burear has an advertisement in Internet.No matter how, travelling fee and other aparts are not definitude.I sincerely hope that you can help me that telling me about these issues.I will thank you very much.