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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(95):酒后驾车

发布时间:2015-04-30 10:29浏览次数:712
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
On May 7, nineteen-year-old Hu Bin, after drinking, knocked a man to death when he was driving his sports car at an extremely fast pace between 84.1 k/h to 101.2 k/h. Hu was sentenced into prison for three years, according to the final judgment. Out of a hope for better traffic regulation and more drivers with loving hearts, Hangzhou City has since set up several special zebra crossings, which are wider, color-changed, and feature loving hearts wrapped up in the middle.
On August 4, a sixteen-year-old girl was crashed into by a black Porsche Cayenne and dead while crossing the street in Hangzhou City. The driver, 29-year-old Wei Zhigang, and his fiancé, who was also in the car when the accident took place, were both found drunk. According to witnesses, the Porsche Cayenne was speeding at more than 80 kilometers per hour at the time. The victim, Ma Fangfang, is a waitress in a restaurant in Hangzhou. She was walking on the zebra crossing when the Porsche Cayenne violently charged toward her and knocked her away. Wei Zhigang, the driver of the Porsche Cayenne, together with his fiancé, was detained and investigated by the Public Security Organ in Hanghzhou. Ironically, the zebra crossing where the accident took place is titled the “Zebra crossing of Living Hearts” in memory of the May 7 car accident in Hangzhou.
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点。
2.以约120词对“酒后驾车”事件发表看法,并要包括下列要点:
(1)酒后驾车的危害;
(2)该不该严厉处罚醉酒驾车者, 为什么?
[写作要求]
1.作文中你可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不能直接引用原文中的句子 ]
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
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