题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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We have been taught to learn knowledge but not to be a good citizen. A famouse person once said ,knowledge may take you here but it is character keep you here. How to be a good man and have a harmony with others ? In my view the first thing to do is trust . Firstly,trust makes you fall down your heart and let others open the door of your heart then you get the chance to know others what kind of people they are actually .Sceondly trust makes life easy. IN germmany there are special surpermakets which have no stuff to service but all chores will be done by custormers.