小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my best friend is GanRu ,she is the class monitor. she very good,she can speak Eglish well.GanRu can play the piano.Her father is a doctor,her mother is a Maths teacher. GanRu was born in ShanXi . She is ready to help me.But she is strict with me.She has a dog.she usually go for a walk with it,she give me a little dog .she like the singer is GEM.I also like she.