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I have many friends,but luwei is my best friend in my world. luwei comes from China.He has a lovely family.He is a kind boy and love to help others.Once test,I foget to leave my pen in home.He give his another pen to me.So I get a good mark.After that ,I thanks to him . I think he is a good friend for me.