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字数:300 满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。
Most of people do not have money to buy thing which he would like, we usually collect a lot of coupons to save the money, if you want to travel and eat something, you can get the coupons a lot website, such as lahshou, meituan and nuomi. In Sunday we can go to see movie , but it only spend 20 dollar, but this life is not good for me, because you always spend the less money to get the cost value, it is really tried.