作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
As we know, English has already become an international language. It is widely used in the world. However, a few students hard to master it. Let me show how to learn it well. Firstly, makeing up your mind to learn English well and never give it up. Secondly, it is an effective way to read the text aloudly in the morning and try to remember the important words, phrases and patterns. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should finish all the homework on time. When you come across some problems, turn to your teacher or classmates for help. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Thus, all of us should make great progress one day.I am sure that we well learn english very well.