邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真；采用了一些简单的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

As we all realize,safety is extremely important.As far as I am concede,school safety is must be alarm,Then,How to improve school safety,Let us follow these tips to protect our life. First,we should add many security guard in ampus.Children must know about safety something.Secondly,present should meet children when after school.It goes was saying that present should not ingore chlidren life.