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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；请注意分段。
from the picture,we can see the education pays in different degrees.first,less and less people improved their degree so that couldn't be employeed now.second,because that,those person which degree was high got more earnings.like less than high schooldiploma just only $451,but doctoral degree had $1551. third, we had better try our best to improve our ability and made us adapt in the competion world. what do you think?
