邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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As we all realize,safety is extremely important.As far as I am concede,school safety is must be alarm,Then,How to improve school safety,Let us follow these tips to protect our life. First,we should add many security guard in campus.Children must know about something safety.Secondly,present should meet children when after school.It goes wihtout saying that present should not ignore children life.