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Nowadays many students don't pay much attention to spelling which cause them make a lot of mistakes.This is a hot potato to them.Now we will talk about what led to it. First,carelessness is the essential reason.Often we think that speeling is such a easy thing that we don't do it with great care.So spelling is nelegct little by little.Then,most of the teachers think it is uncessiary to highlight the importance of spelling.Owing to that, the conception spelling becomes poor.What's more,many advanced degree students don't think their spelling is so important. To improve this phenonmena,I think the followings should be done.First,students themselves should have a correct conception of spelling.At the same time teachers should give more instruction on students' spelling.