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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46272
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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