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Sophie is my good friend. She is very beautiful and slim.She is good at singing and dacing,but also good at playing football.We uasally have lunch verey weekend in the sister hotel, the pork is her favorite dish .Why she can be my good friend? The reson is that she is very helpful and kind. I can remmber ,onece i was crying at the conner,she came to me and stayed there untill i was fine ,and told a lot of things to made me feel better.We have been good friend for 2years ,and i beleive we will always be good friends in the future.