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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36988
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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采用了一些简单的从句;请加强词汇表达的多样性,但请注意检查拼写的拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Sophie is my good friend. She is very beautiful and slim.She is good at singing and dacing,but also good at playing football.We uasally have lunch verey weekend in the sister hotel, the pork is her favorite dish .Why she can be my good friend? The reson is that she is very helpful and kind. I can remmber ,onece i was crying at the conner,she came to me and stayed there untill i was fine ,and told a lot of things to made me feel better.We have been good friend for 2years ,and i beleive we will always be good friends in the future.

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