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nowadays many students are use the phone .someone think they are fashion another tend to keep in touch with their family and friends .using the phone is not bad ,but some students take it in school ,expecially in the classroom ,sometimes,i could hear the sounds from the phone which have a great influence in our study .besides, some send the message to others that waste the precious time in my view,classroom is our study's place,we all need quilt .students shouldn't use phone in classroom .we should buried n study not phone .in addition ,shool should plan a rule that students shouldn't use phone in classroom
