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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Nowadays many students are use the phone.someone think they are fashion another tend to keep in touch with their family and friends. Using the phone is not bad,but some students take it in school ,especially in the classroom,sometimes,i could hear the sounds from the phone which have a great influence in our study.besides, some send the message to others that waste the precious time In my view,classroom is our study's place,we all need quilt .students shouldn't use phone in the classroom.we should concentrate on study not use the phone.in addition,shool should plan a rule that students shouldn't use phone in the classroom
