2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

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The one is take the bus,the other is by bicycle.Some students are tend to go to school by bus that not only save our precious time but also save our energy.For many people that it is a good way to school. Everything have two cion.Some are like riding a bike to school.It is a useful method that to execise our body.What's more,It's more convenient for our students. As far as i am concerned.I prefer go to school by bike because bike is environment-friendly!