2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

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The one is take the bus,the other is by bicycle.Some students are tend to go to school by bus that not only save our precious time but also save our energy.So many person like take the bus Everything have two coin.Some are like riding a bike to school.It can exercise our body.What's more,It's more convenient for our students. As far as i am concerned.I prefer to go to school by bike.It's obviousthat ride bike is more environmental than take the bus for us everyone.