2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am from fu jian, My hometone has many famous place. The one of most famous place is wuyi mountone. This is could stand of my hometone buautiful place. As we know,wuyi mountone is one of most beautiful place in the world. Ti is located North in fujian. There are many perrty stone, greenof trees and friendly people. Besides visitors can take the bamboo ship overlook two sides place. The river water can see the fish.There are most tea - Da hong pao. It was called "tea of king".I believe my friend must be very happy ang interesting. I think wuyi mountone beautiful place delious food and friend people is best culture.