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Nowdays,many students dislike to learn English.Other believe that English is not inportant in the further.The other think it extremely hard to learn well.Therefor,the student ignores the English.I am worried about it Everybody knows that use the English wiedly nowdays and English is the second laugrage.So we must lean English very well.How to inprove our English ?Let me tell you some advise.I am sure that they are helpful. First,we should read English loudly in the every moring.