一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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This is a busy day. In the morning I have breakfast at six o'clock and I'll help my mother do the housework. Then I do homework at ten o'clock.The homework is too difficult for me to do.So I do it slowly. Then I go to play the table-tennis with my friend.We are all very happy. Then I come home from the gym at fifteen o'clock,so I watch TV.Then I play the computer. It's a happy and busy day!