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Nowadays,many students dislike learning English.Other believe that English is not important in the further.The other think it extremely hard to learn well.Therefore,the student ignores the English.I am worried about it Everybody knows that use the English widely nowadays and English is the second lagrange.So we must lean English very well.How to improve our English?Let me tell you some advise.I am sure that they are helpful. First,we should read English loudly in the every morning.