作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,many students dislike learning English.Other believe that English is not important in the further.The other think it extremely hard to learn well.Therefore,the student ignores the English.I am worried about it Everybody knows that use the English widely nowadays and English is the second lagrange.So we must lean English very well.How to improve our English?Let me tell you some advise.I am sure that they are helpful. First,we should read English loudly in the every morning.Then we must read many English magazine.Third,we can talk about the foreigner,it can make us to interested in English . Anyway,we never give up to learn English.Please keep on study when you are young.