作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇表达丰富度较高,就是学术词汇用的太少;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
As we foreknow, English has already become an international language. It is widely used in the world. However, a few students find it hard to master it. Let me show how to learn it extremelr well. Firstly, make up your mind to learn English well and never give it up. Secondly, it is an effective way to read the text aloud in the morning and try to remember the important words, phrases and patterns. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should finish all the homework on time. When you come across some problems, turn to your teacher or classmates for help. Don't be afraid of making mistakes.If so,I think you English will be excellent. Thus, all of us should make great progress one day.