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2012年6月16日雅思大作文真题:Urban Community

发布时间:2013-07-22 15:51浏览次数:856
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An increasing number of people do not know their neighbors, and there is no longer a sense of community. What do you think are the causes of this situation? Can you suggest some solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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邻里之间的疏远是现代社会人际关系冷漠的典型写照。其原因有很多方面。

第一,邻里之间的交流和互动活动相比较以前要减少很多,社会竞争和工作压力使得人们无暇参与更多的社区活动,因此与邻居的互动交流大幅度减少,邻里关系自然不如从前;

第二,邻里关系的疏远,以及邻里互相不愿意交流与互动,源自邻里关系不再是人们生活的不可缺少的一个环节。没有互助和友善的邻居,人们的生活质量不会受到太多的负面影响。

第三,邻里关系的疏远,还来自于一些现代社会人们对于陌生人的猜忌,担心与邻居交流可能会受骗或被误导。

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Since the economy develops in a fast speed,the trade happens frequently and it causes people stuck in a fast live.It takes over many people time for enjoying their life.People become pococurante and even do not know their neighbors.I think it would cause an pococurante in communication between each others.As well as it would weak the ability of team work and strengthen your self-conceit. Through that i have some advise for that,just simple but work,first,if you have no time to enjoy free time with your neighbors,you could say "Good morning! And in case I don't see you: good afternoon, good evening and good night!" in morning when you meet your neighbors.Then your neighbors would think you are a good man. Secondly, if you have a barbecue weekend,you can invite your neighbors or send food that you cook to your neighbors. Thirdly,if your neighbors need help,you should stretched out your hand to help. After all, i think that the important things in life not how many you have or what you done but how you live.In this earth what we have is each others.So do not stop helping others or communicating with others.

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