2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A beautiful city in china Diferrent city have diferrent beauty.sometimes,we can be asstrected in beautiful scenery in diferrent city.today,i will be supposeed to go to visit my hometown with a foreign friend.The beautiful scenery wo see are as follows: At first,wo visit a fangte,it is a piace where evereyone likes