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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12939
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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Recently, with the international rapid development.Electronic communication make us life more convice. people and peolop can communication everytime and everywhere. So some peole think the electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. But I think the electronic communication could not replace the face-to-face contact. First, only through online peole hard know real life each other. second, electronic communication people will do not belive each other. last but not least electronic commnication make people relationship reduce and more . many friend together all play the phenonenon,seldom communication. This make me sad. So I belive the electrontic communication never replace the face-to-face contactt

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