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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Kelly Lam made a survey about the views of sharing feelings among China students last weekend. However,more than 3o% of students were unwilling to sharing with others whatever happy or upset. Because our education haven't made children know the importance of the sharing. As far as the experts're concerned, it was necessary to learn how to share feelings in the time we live. In addition to, it was much favorable for growing in the future to take in how to share feelings.
