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Dialects are culture of the local place and are a kind of special language of one place . Recently , there is controversy enjoying its popularity on the internet . It is the dispute that are dialects just as acceptable in Public ?Different people has different ideas , as the old saying goes ,Wise see wisdom ;Benevolent See Benevolence .Some people hold the view that dialects should not be forbidden in the public , while others deem that dialects are not acceptable in Public . As far as I am concerned , the dialects play an important rule in people's life ,whatever in Public . The dialects should be acceptable in Public . The reasons are following . Firs of all ,dialects are a very useful tool for communication , particularly , among the illiterate people , they are unique way for them to communicate with others as they don't know Putonghua .Moreover , as i have mentioned above , I dialects are culture of local place , an unique art . If the dialects are forbidden in Public , without no doubt that , they will disappear , even we could not see them anymore . So we should let them , the dialect culture shine in Public , it will become popular or acceptable everywhere .Last , if dialects are not acceptable in Public , the air in Public will become dull and boring , because all people use the same language . people can not enjoy the funny and the humor of the dialects . To sum up .dialects should not be forbidden in Public . We should aware of their importance . We need them for our communication .