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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10532
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;从句使用量稍显不足;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Dialects are culture of the local place and are a kind of special language of one place . Recently , there is controversy enjoying its popularity on the internet . It is the dispute that are dialects just as acceptable in Public ?Different people has different ideas , as the old saying goes ,Wise see wisdom ;Benevolent See Benevolence .Some people hold the view that dialects should not be forbidden in the public , while others deem that dialects are not acceptable in Public . As far as I am concerned , the dialects play an important rule in people's life ,whatever in Public . The dialects should be acceptable in Public . The reasons are following . Firs of all ,dialects are a very useful tool for communication , particularly , among the illiterate people , they are unique way for them to communicate with others as they don't know Putonghua .Moreover , as i have mentioned above , I dialects are culture of local place , an unique art . If the dialects are forbidden in Public , without no doubt that , they will disappear , even we could not see them anymore . So we should let them , the dialect culture shine in Public , it will become popular or acceptable everywhere .Last , if dialects are not acceptable in Public , the air in Public will become dull and boring , because all people use the same language . people can not enjoy the funny and the humor of the dialects . To sum up .dialects should not be forbidden in Public . We should aware of their importance . We need them for our communication .

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