2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

If my foreign friend want to visit my hometown,I would like to take him to see Beijing. I have some reson. Firestly,I think beijing is our importante city .There has many history.What's more,there has many beautiful places ,such as great wall ,gugong ,niaochao,last but not lest it is a dependente city . I hope my friend can like beijing china.