2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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computer and man These days,computer has became more and more popular in our daily life.It makes our life more convenient and modern.with the rapid development of computer,we even can say it is a enduring wonder on record.There is no deny that computers play an important role in some aspect,such as science,deucation technology etc.But sometimes it seems that people can't live without computer.As we all known,a mass of children abandon themselves to the computer games.This lead them to have no energy and time to having class,which may ruined their lives.Even though the computers make closely contact with our human nature,wo should treat them resonable.