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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达多样性不够，还要注意词汇拼写；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Car Accident With the development of the science tecenology,the traffic is become more and more convenience.Especially,the car was came out.Now,the car is become more and more convinced,but it brings many car accidents. On yesterday afternoon,I remembered the red car kiss the black car.The accident occured the our school beside street.Luckily,the people were safe,them just feel afraid.When happened the accident,I was talking with my friend.I found the red car rushed out the traffic lights,so it caused the red car kissed the black car. In my opinion,i think the red car owner should take it all charge.Because the accident reason is he break the traffic rule.I hope every people should obey the traffic rule.
