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Rules and laws are the foundation stones of a well-disciplined progressive society. Some people believe that individual should not restricted to do whatever they want to do as a part of their right. Others affirm that, people enjoy more liberty, through restricting some freedom. Undoubtedly, in terms of peace and safety of the society, government publishes the rule and the laws. If there is, no laws some people will commit crime without the fear that the laws punish them. This may ultimately leads to an increased crime rate. For example, if shoplifters are not punished it will be difficult for shopkeepers to maintain their business. Some sacrifices and patience from the citizen’ ...
