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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
As we can see in this picture.A child take a mobile phone and ask his teacher"isn't that all the education I really need?".As we all know,the Internet is a magic thing widely used all the time.Part of the problem is that the Internet can't instead of learning.It's necessary for us to improve ourselves by learning.It just a way we got information from Internet. Some study shows a large gap on knowledge among the Internet.Young people are more likely to get information from Internet.
