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We will graduate from junior high school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend- Li lei. Li Lei is a top student. He is outgoing and hard-working. He has a lot of interests and he is always ready to help others. We get on very well with each other. I’m so proud of him. I care so much about him that I want to do something meaningful for him. Before leaving school, I’ll send him a card by myself with my best wishes. I hope he will have a bright future and our friendship will last forever.