英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 初中> 中考英语> 真题> 2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(63)写作:期末考试

2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(63)写作:期末考试

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:00浏览次数:640
要求:

很多学校在临近期末考试时,将体育课改成语数外等“主课”课程。对此老师和学生有不同的观点,请根据表格提示,谈谈你的看法。


Teacher's idea
1.Time is limited.
2.Knowledge is life
3.The grades are important.


Your ideas


注意:
1.       开头部分已写好,不计入总词数。
2.       所写内容必须包括表格中老师的观点和你的至少三个观点。

3.       词数:80个左右。


In many schools, the PE class will be replaced by Chinese, math or English before the final exam.___________________________________________________________________

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

In many schools, the PE class will be replaced by Chinese, math or English before the final exam. Many teachers think that time is limited and students should pay more attention to their main lessons. And knowledge is life and the score is really important,too. The teacher supposed that the students had fewer PE classes is nothing serious.But I don't think so. In my opinion, Having PE can not only keep us healthy and strong, but also make us relaxed after studying for a long time. Chinese, math and English are really important, but if we have not a good body, nothing is valuable. So I hope we can have our PE class as usual. Do you agree with me?

会员评论0个评论)
33530626
金币:117

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:71.0Ain妹

人气:26发布:2014-02-09

得分:70.0ann19910410

人气:49发布:2015-03-18

得分:66.0X_solvenow

人气:45发布:2015-02-16

得分:59.5yifansion

人气:87发布:2013-08-03