The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. _________________
Thank you for your listening!
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" Learn to express thanks " Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find most Middle School students don’t show any sense of “Thanks”.They suppose that they should eat well and wear fashionable clothes. As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers .They teach us much knowlege and how to be a good pepole. Besides, our friends always give us encouragement and help. In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness. Thank you for your listening!