2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦132:My Dream Home in the Dream Neighbourhood

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My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It has two floors. There is a beautiful garden in front of my house. The garden is full of different kinds of flowers. I can always smell these nice flowers and water them. There are many rooms in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a dining room, a living room and a bathroom. On the first floor, there are six bedrooms. There is also a big balcony on the first floor. I can look out at the hill and trees on the balcony. My dream home is in a very great neighbourhood. The neighbourhood is very big and the neighbours are kind to each other. There are many volunteers in my neighbourhood. Some of them are doctors, so they can take good care of the sick people. If there is something wrong with your things , the engineers here can help you fix them. When you have any problem with your study, the college students will help you. They often help the old clean their houses and do some shopping.