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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
It Pays to Be Honest If you want to read this composition, please answer this question: Do you like a honest man? I think that all the people's answer is " Yes!" I believe that the most people are honest, but a few of person are dishonest. An old woman usually sold vegetable on gate of the Zhongshan Park. Some people said that her life is poor that her husband and her only son were diet, but her son leaves a three years old grandson to her, so she must to bring up him. Last weekend, a man lied her and he have given her two hundreds, but the money are counterfeit, the old woman were cry. But it is not end. Because the old woman is honey. And then the people know this thing, so they have given some money to her. In the end, her have received one thousand. This story tell us that it pays to be honest.
