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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
the true meaning of happiness:as the saying goes,"happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them."The carefree life only brings about temporary happiness, while the process of striving eternal happiness. Happiness deriving from entertainment is superficial and shallow.everybody are likely to live a happy life without any load.However,a life without any waves will make people lose the will and enthusiasm, even muddle away their days,which is harmful to the society.What's more,this kind of happiness ,as it were, drugs which are empty spiritually. Fighting with problems is the truth of happiness.Only the fruit under the baptism of sweat is the juiciest and sweetest. We may feel uncomfortable and painful at the beginning ,when facing with the problems.However,as time goes by,we gradually come to realize the happiness of going over the difficulty.It's a sense of achievement and pride,which can hold long in our heart. In its simplest terms,for pigs,eating and sleeping is happy enough for them .but as human beings,only by striving can we reach for the real happiness.
