文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
We are what we read There are two point of view of what the best way to learn,reading or practicing. Many persons say that we learn by doing. And they think learn best from first-hand and concern experiences ,using their senses ,exploring their environment of people,things ,places and events.Of course,I agree to that point in some way.But I prefer that we learn most from reading. Knowledge chances our life,and the knowledge comes from reading.So,finding the right book at the right time is very critical for every one.We need some positive books when we are in a low spirit.That kinds of book can give us courage and strength to get through our current difficulties.We can learn many encouraging thing from the experience that are written in the books.We need some warm books when we are suffering somethings terrible,like losing or being apart with someone we love.That kinds of books can give us warmth as well as strength.We need some professional books when we need some any kinds of skills,those books will give us the up to date information.We need to read different book in the different situation. In some cases,we are what we read.The books we read play an important role in many way of our life.Those may change the way how we express,the words and gestures we choice.As far as I am concerned,to learn best and be the best,we need both reading and practicing.We can not be at the top of tree until we learn from reading and practicing.