文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
We are what we read There are two point of view of what the best way to take in,reading or practicing. Many persons hold the faith that we learn by doing. And they think learn best from first-hand and concern experiences,using their senses,exploring their environment of people,things,places and events.Of course,I agree with that point.But I favor that we learn most from reading. Knowledge changes our life,and the knowledge comes from reading.So,finding the right book at the right time is remarkably critical for every one.We need some positive books when we are in a low spirit.Those books can give us courage and strength to overcome our current difficulties.We can ingest many encouraging thing from the experience that are written in the books.We need some warm books when we are suffering something terrible,like losing or being apart with someone we love.Those books can give us warmth, as well as, strength.We need some professional books when we need some skills,those books will give us the up to date information.We need to read different book in the different situation. In some cases,we are what we read.The books we read play an important role in our life.Those may change the way how we express,the words and gestures we choice.As far as I am concerned,to learn best and be the best,we need both reading and practicing.We can not be at the top of tree until we learn from reading and practicing.