2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hi,my dear friend ,I weclome to you are going to visit my hometown. My hometown is a beautiful city,it has some very fuuny and nice places.I like the place of Jiefangbei.I think its the most interestingplace in my hometown.There are some resons for you.First,it is the represent for my hometown and is famous for us.Second,Jiefangbei has beautiful clothes and beauty,it as shopping-Heaven.Last,it is very nice ,in special in evening.so why is I will take you to see. Of course, Jiefangbei has some delicous foods ,I believe you would like it.So,you are going to visit my hometown immediately .I welcome to you .