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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16956
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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Statistics show that the number of marine debris, human activities have amazing, there are about 6400000 tons of garbage into the ocean around the world every year, and every day there are about 8000000 pieces of garbage into the ocean. The marine garbage into the ocean about 70% settlement to the ocean floor, 15% floating on the surface of water, 15% reside on the beach. Marine waste will cause serious pollution to the marine landscape visual effect, the health of marine ecosystems, may also threaten the safety of navigation, and thus have a negative effect on marine economy. The cross-border movement characteristics of marine garbage, involving a wide range, and bring adverse effects on the marine environment is more serious, so to strengthen the monitoring and evaluation of marine debris, becoming a new situation, an important task of the protection of the marine environment.

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